Diberdayakan oleh Blogger.
RSS

exposition text ( from Tri Wulaningrum ) acceleration class.


The Disadvantages of Alcohol


Drinking alcohol at any time is not good for our bodies. We better to consume atter than alcohol, because water is good for our bodies.
            Alcohol is not good for our body because alcohol can cause addiction. Excessive addiction can interfere with the body. The disruption to activities and interfere with the organ in the body. If we are addicted then our bodies will require a continual consumption of alcohol. Therefore, we can suffer organ damage slowly or quickly.
            Alcohol is bad for us because alcohol is a beverage that is very expensive. that all is not suitable for people who are in the developing and underdeveloped countries. Because it all can disrupt our economy.
            Because it all, we as young people should never consume alcohol. because alcohol can damage our future.



  • Digg
  • Del.icio.us
  • StumbleUpon
  • Reddit
  • RSS

5 komentar:

Unknown mengatakan...

Thanks for posting your article Welanmeniel...
Now i hope you will get your friend's response by giving them your comment too...
I'll wait...

Reni Dwi Wahyuning Tyas mengatakan...

I think your text is so simple and interesting ! :)

ArchieFidia mengatakan...
Komentar ini telah dihapus oleh pengarang.
Unknown mengatakan...

Wulan..
I think your hortatory exsposition is good..

Whether alcohol has benefits when consumed according to the dose?

arima melia sari mengatakan...

hay wulan,,,
i think your hortatory is very nice,
simple, yet clear...
and words use easy understand.. heheh

don't forget, comment in my blog ya,,
this is my blog: http://rimarimeerimool.blogspot.com/
heheheh... thank you, bye

Posting Komentar